All Comments on 'Massage from an Ex'

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one star

This is like an ode to abject idiotic, mindless behaviour by a mentally retarded husband. How the fuckhead could think that his slut wife's Ex boyfriend should be allowed to have private massage sessions is just beyond comprehension.

Re: The writing. You are writing almost constantly from a narrator Point of View (POV). But... that you also try to keep writing from the same pov when you are not actually in the room! That is not possible. You would have to change, perhaps to the wife's POV. But you don't. You keep writing as if you are watching as an invisible person. Then you throw in thoughts not only from your wife but also from the arsehole ex BF POV about what he is seeing. Again, impossible. Sorry but you need to sort all that out or the writing will just seem to be ridiculous. (Meant to be constructive) Cheers.

What a stupid whore.

She lied and cheated. I hope she gets divorced and leaves with nothing.

I hate cheating cunts. Wonder if she'll feel any guilt when her husband kicks her out of the house?

Cuck story !!!! 0*

Where the fuck do u fags crawl out from??

What a fucking cunt.

What a fucking idiot.

You gave no clue this was more than one part or is leading into a cuckold situation. 1*

5 Stars

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

Just another cheating bitch. Let the husband get a special massage from a young fit sexy woman.

Amazing how a 1st person narrator knows not only what is happening when he's not there but the other people's thoughts.

Score: zero! Oh ease ex boy toy fuck my wife. Long drive off a hairpin turn

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

I’m not sure if you are aware of it, but you have a great deal of power when it comes to comments. I encourage you to delete the comments which are rude and useless. You do have that power, author. Below is the process you need to follow to delete all of the rude comments.

1. Log-in to Literotica

2. Click on Works on the left hand side in the Literotica control panel

3. Locate the story in question

4. Click on the “word bubble” icon on the left, on the far right hand side of the story you have located

5. Locate the comment you wish to delete and then click on the rubbish bin on the far right hand side of the comment in question

6. Click on delete comment, and you’re done.

Trust me and believe me when I say that these trolls will soon grow weary of posting nasty comments on your work if you just delete all their comments quickly, consistently, and without any mercy.

Sorry gay boy, two stories and you're clearly in need of opening that door and letting everyone know what/who you really are.

When you kids fixate on BIG DICKS/COCKS it reflects the repressed gay desires you have.......................so you have fun with Nancy.

1 Star

Cheating bitch.

26thNCuck Disapproved

Hey bitch suck my cock!

And? Another cuck got out of the closet and another whore didn't love or respect her husband! So what's new? Below zero rating

Looking forward to part 2. Lol to the anon thinking the husband is gonna kick her out of the house, why would he do that in a fantasy story like this? If they don't like reading stories like these they just shouldn't come here

Great comments as usual. Thanks to the anon with the advice on deleting comments but it makes me laugh seeing them, so it's all good haha

Also thanks to the other odd positive comments!

I was sure I had tagged it as "cuckold" but it didn't work for some reason. I have sent a request to do so again. Though it is funny to think of all these commenters reading this not realising what it is, then going full rage.

I take your notes on the comments about the perspective. I guess I was thinking about it like I, "Chris", had been told all about it by Penny later on and so Chris can describe everything. Ah well, something to make clearer the next time.

As for the general comments about cuckolding and how "she is a cheating bitch!!!' and should be kicked out (LOL indeed anon). Probably just a bunch of 12 year olds but here goes... it's a fantasy! Obviously a lot of people are into the idea of their partners being unfaithful. The "loving" in "loving wives" is meant to be ironic haha. I enjoy all sorts of erotic stuff but prefer writing about this. Obviously requires a little suspension of belief " but I assume you've watched porn? No need to worry about divorces or shouting after all this (hahaha)...the aim is to enjoy and jerk off.

Dump that slutty two timing cheater

I really hope you have a part two where the cheaters get burned, they are walking clichés, the words ‘don’t want to disrepect’ come out of mouths and they do that.

I hope part two gets them what’s coming to them.

What was really engaging though is you told it as a third person almost from her point of view.

Well done on the first part

Congrats for a very nice story, five stars. About those questioning your omniscient point of view, you knowing what was happening even when you were not there, and even knowing what she was thinking about, in my opinion is a positive way of writing. When people go out of their way to explain why and how the knew something, it distracts from the main story.

This is another story of a cheating wife. Her husband had given her permission to enjoy a free and professional massage being within limits but end of the day, what did she do, she cheated on her husband in return. That's the reward she gave her husband for trusting her. Now why shouldn't I wish her to rot in hell...

Dear author, your story is as pathetic as you're (haha).

Great story, sexy and exiting. I love it...

While hot as it went there are too many untolds sich as how the husband tells the story of things he was not a part of