All Comments on 'Massage Provides Her First Lesson'

A well written, sexy story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

Excellent story. Having been a massage therapist for a number of years it was nice to see a massage story written by someone who has massage experience. I always kept my sessions strictly professional but this story was very close to fantasies I've had. Very well written and very hot. And please... A follow up

Nice premise.

But sex moves ahead much to quickly and automatically.

When Carie ges naked, there should have been some shyness on her part. And she should have explained that this was her first time letting anyone -- male or female -- seeing her naked. Or touching her naked. That would have been the point when her body could have really been described and admired.

And Carie's lesson should have included edging, not allowing him to cum so fast.

And does anyone think of a cock as a "member"?

You need an editor/proofreader.

First her name is MARISA. Then it's MELISSA. Huh?

And you wrote: "Calie liked I nice butt on a guy, and Peter's defensively fit in that category." You meant A NICE BUTT, not I NICE BUTT. And you meant DEFINITELY, not DEFENSIVELY.

Four stars for concept.