All Comments on 'Massage Therapy Ch. 01'

very hot story indeed. loved it

and sexy. Five stars.

I always liked this one and am really happy it's returned. I remember reading this one back in '09, along with chapter 2. When Chapter 3 came out, shortly after, chapter 1 was taken down. It pleases me that the whole story is now complete.

Nice to see this one back,comparison with 'Just Get it Over With' is fascinating, you have improved over time. This is good, Native Sister and Just Get are both excellent.

To this day I wish my sister let me fuck her cunt. I loved that she was so in to tasting my cock after anal and even licking up her own shit but I wanted morel

Can't wait to read next chapter

To be 18 with a professional Mom, Kristin is very naive. I hope someone gets fucked so I can score a (5) and my own cock with soften

Another well-written story. This one is very good as a barely of age daughter-sister knows some basics about her body and sex but has obviously never gone very far. Now her college brother who is hung comes home and what starts out as innocent now ends with his baby sister jerking him off to a huge climax and to have their Mom standing there watching without saying a word is interesting. Maybe, she wants to continue her daughters education and maybe fill a long overdue need for herself ?? The next chapter or two should be very interesting. Cannot wait to read them. Thanks again.

Look this is an update. Chapter 2 and 3 are already posted. While I agree it's cringy af but I like the simplicity or innocence. So quit yapping‌, start fapping!

How is he going to explain his letting his sister give him a hand job? Maybe mom would like to handle that monster and teach her daughter how it should be done. Maybe show her that if she made him cum in her mouth it wouldn't make such a mess. Maybe...

Amazing story i loved it, i'll definitely be needing a towel too im soaking haha

Well written and hot as hell!!

I must admit, I'm quite amused with the update. I've read this a couple of years ago and the texting and calling has been replaced with Facebook and SnapChat.

There is no way an 18 year old girl can be that naive about a mans body or sex !!

Its a good story but she couldnt be that thick about sex, not at 18.

*bizarre

I couldn't help but laugh. After reading multiple paragraphs about how she has huge breasts and everything and then finding out that she only has 32C I couldn't help but snort. I have 32D sized boobs and I'm pretty small. People think that just because they're Ds they're big. A 32D will have 6 inches less of boob volume (which is a lot) than a 38D. Cup size is just relative to band size that's all

Good story! You had a nice build up to the climax. It would have been much hotter if his sister could have been about 15 years old, but I understand Literotica will not publish the story unless everyone actively involved is at least 18 years old. Being older detracts from the story, but it also keeps everyone out of legal complications.

18 year old having recess in school? 18 year old not knowing why a man would get hard massaging her boobs? At least try and make it realistic.

I was a little taken back by the lack of knowledge of an 18 year old. Other than that this was a great story. They came together in a good way. It was fun to find out mom was watching nearly the whole thing.

I can only imagine what Mom does next to assist her son and daughter to learn more about how to stimulate a mans penis and maybe even how her son could then explore the beauty of his sisters sweet pussy and maybe Moms too.

There is much more focus nowadays on being 18+ than there used to be.

Gone are the days of vivid imagination and here are the days of political correctness.

No way would an 18 year old, even brought up in a convent, not understand what makes a dick and an orgasm work.

Certainly not with Internet access too.

I guess the honesty has been overtaken by mores of society, huh?

Very naive...should had made some changes to the story, rather than simply alter the age.

Still a great read...just not buying the "18".🤣🤣🙏🙏🤣🤣

Thank you for the enjoyment.😊🙏🙏😊

Good stuff, brother and sister exploration. And then comes mom into the mix ❤️

Here we go again: copy&paste characters from your other stories, same backgrounds, a sleazy main male character with exaggerated proportions like that is enough for good sex (which is not, it only causes pain in most women), and girls that are dumb as a rock, with loli bodies and breasts bigger than melons. What I actually hate is that always your main characters do some non-con actions like it's normal to do, like spy, touch, molest or have sex with the girl sleeping, take advantage, manipulate and lie, blackmail, cheat, and up to the point to wish "to tear off her panties/clothes and then rape her violently" (a usual line in your stories). Who the hell think something like that is actually normal behaviour? Obviously, someone who's not sane in the head, and probably a danger to other women.

And this level of naivety? This story and "Birds, Bees and Booze", I'm almost sure that these were some pedo-stories that were slightly edited to Literotica standards. It's that, or the girls were mentally-handicapped. A grown girl can't be this naive in modern times, not even in the last century. There's no way. You would need to do an evil experiment in the middle of nowhere and leave a little girl isolated there for at least a decade, to get this level of dumbness or ignorance. They act and sound exactly like an 8-year-old girl. It's sick and creepy to read sexualized characters like these in erotic stories. And more when they keep saying "Daddy" all the time, like in "Birds, Bees and Booze". It just confirms my suspicions that these were edited stories so they could be posted in Literotica. And it's worst when the girls look like those Japanese sex dolls. They even share their intelligence and personality...

And as usual, the sleazy main character always get away with his primal wishes. And when he needs to be a real man for once and face the music and consequences, you leave the stories hanging and incomplete. What a joke of a "man".

Would be better on a different platform and more credible if the characters were 14. No one is this ignorant at 18(+)

Since I enjoy the are of massage therapy, I really found it stimulating. But I don't understand is the lack of knowledge the sister had. It seems that her mother was definitely certified and had opened conversations with her daughter. Plus she seemed to be familiar with porn, but yet still have child like knowledge.