All Comments on 'Massage Turns to Incest'

Damn, bro, you're quite a writer. It is better than most of the porn videos available in the market. My orgasm was violent just quarter down the story.

Fuck!!!! Awesome story, I hope there is more to come about this loving couple

He needs to breed his mother. She would look great with a baby bump.

This story was very hot. I just hadvto jerk off to it.

Being a single mom all those years and not dating, I'm assuming she wasn't on birth control. Yet the topic is never discussed. It would be hot for the son to give her a baby bump (maybe next story installment). He would then start to call her by her first name and give her a ring to show his commitment. Keep going!

Breed her

5 stars. Forget it was mother and son. The sex scenes were HOT!!

That’s a lot if smirking you’re doing !

Like the story! You use the word smirked much too often. Otherwise, well done,

I Loved it. Thanks for sharing. 5* from me.

Who’s pregnant?

Best stop this one here.

My auto correct changes it to 'duck' too..

I know how it is and i can tell you, making love (fucking) with your own mother is so great and beautiful.

I thought this was a pretty good read. but a shaved mom???!

You ruined the story with your dot dot dot. I'm sick of editing them out just to hear a story on my text reader without them. Then your son character became a foul depraved animal.

Too much smirking ...

Too redundant. Hard cock, hard cock, hard cock.......smirk, smirk, smirk......

Got boring fast. One last comment....are we concerned about getting MOTHER pregnant?

there definitely needs to be a pregnancy now, thats what happens to couples alot if theres no mention of protection. Just saying...

Was OK but not much new to read and this subject of massage going farther has been done before.

2 Stars

Mom needed to say her son's name in there somewhere. "Oh Boris, fuck me harder, I love your cock." Maybe something like, "That's it Boris, just like that, you're going to make your mother cum!!!" Then as she's coming, "Oh Boris, oh Boris, don't stop, I'm coming, I'm coming!!!"

I'm not sure but I got the feeling he might have had a hard cock. Was it said he may have had a hard cock. I don't think that the mom would have been happy if he didn't have a hard cock. It's never a good thing to not have a hard cock. What drivel. Two stars.

There are about 3, maybe 4 paragraphs in this story and they just get repeated over and over again. Sometimes less is more.

ChatGPT clearly wrote this. The repetition gives it away, as well as the repeated sentence structure. Only impressive thing here is how many people you fooled.

Made my cock very hard seen as I'm wearing a woman's mini skirt and lace panties I'm horney as fuck reading this

There was just a bit too much dirty talk. It got kind of repetitive. Someone made a comment about ChatGPT writing this and now I can't help but wonder if there's truth to it.

Also, how does she go from being celibate to needing to be fucked relentlessly daily? No one needs to fuck as often as the people in these stories do. And it's just not practical either. But most authors fail to understand the "less is more" approach. I honestly couldn't imagine having to fuck multiple times every day. It would quickly feel like a chore and lose any real meaning, no matter who it's with. Even if you had a different partner each time, it would still end up feeling like work instead of fun. It's just human nature that we get bored with repetition, no matter the activity; that's why we invented machines. Of course it does sound hot in theory, but in practice it quickly loses its lustre.

How many times can you use "smirk, smirking, smirked, etc." in one story. You must have a prostate the size of a basketball to emit that much cum in such a short period. Mom came 18 years worth in 24 hours.