All Comments on 'Master and Maeve: A Night Out'

I thought this was familar and well it is...

"Ameliajax" was the orginial author w/the same title and tag...

Did you have an issue w/your acct and reposted your story under a new acct?

I did have trouble with my ameliajax account, and am now moving my stories to sheablue. I had to change my blog as well. Thanks for noticing and keeping an eye out!

I loved this! I like the fact that they truly seem to care about one another. I wish you could write a chapter about how they met. You allude to it several times by her having once had difficulty etc. thank you.

wow, that is one fantasy i wouldnt say no to. and i must say the story wasnt too short or too long and i really appreciated that there is clearly more to their relationship than jst dom/sub. great stuff, another author to follow!

is a remarkably fine piece. BDSM doesn't have to be about chains and whips. It's primarily about the cerebral relationship between dom and sub. As this story illustrates beautifully. A rare five stars from me.

much better. Still I don't think you have really hit your stride yet as a writer. Your dialogue is still stilted and lacking. I really wanted to like your stories since I enjoy your blog so much. Oh, well. <shrug>

Okay, you do sex well ...and that's like the understatement of the year. :D This was like an assault on the senses - in a good way.

Looking forward to more submissions from you!

Catching my breath here! I really enjoyed this. The best part was that it was not forced submission, it was willing submission. It's also really nice that he does try to make it about her at the strip club, letting her chose the girl and who gets the first lap dance. It shows a more loving sub/dom relationship in my opinion. Well done!

Tension, tension, tension. Lord have mercy, did this story have tension...and build up, and sweet, agonizing release. It was painful for me, the waiting. I empathized with the woman on an embarrassing level. At the risk of sounding crude, I needed to cum at the end just as badly as she did, and I'm not one to talk about that on critiques. I try to keep things high-brow and above the belt but...fuck.

Supremely sexy, amazingly well-crafted. All do respect to the previous commenter, but that dialogue was anything but stilted. Wonderful, entertaining, and fucking hot. Slick. Wet. Slippery. Hard to keep a handle on but delicious as I rolled it across my tongue.

Normally I would have something witty or poetic to say, but, honestly, I'm too turned on. I want to growl. Do you accept growls as compliments? Because that is about the highest one I can pay.

This story made me stupid with desire. Congratufuckinglations.

A wonderfully written slow burn tale of a willing submissive and the power and trust given to her master. Absolutely loved the amount of sexual tension built up to the very end. The best two scenes were the lap dance with Jade and the final scene. You certainly know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seat.

My only complaint, and it is small, is that the first dancer was portrayed a bit too cliched and stereotyped. Maybe that was to further along the notion that she wasn't the right type for the couple, but I can't help but feel it was a bit overdone if that's the case. Again, a very minor critique.

Keep it up! :)

Who turned up the heat so much? This was very exciting. Well written, too. Tasty.

And that's coming from a guy who's not at all into dom/sub games. But hot damn, this was intoxicating.

Unbelievably hot. Perfect pace, terrific build-up. One of the most erotic stories I've ever read. Thank you, Little One...

Looks like you haven't submitted any pieces in a few years. What a shame! I certainly appreciated the building tempo of the story and the dynamic interplay of the dancer and the Maeve. I hope you are still finding fulfilling fantasies with or without the written word.

I loved this ! 💋