by wannabeluver1991
The problem with this well-written story is its brevity. It has a good introduction, interesting characters, and an engaging plot right up to the last sentence, where it abruptly and unfortunately ends, much too quickly.
its very smuty...i like it..its like one of the best sellers i read..thanks.. :)
It's good to hear feedback and know if I am doing a good job and I try and write more! I am glad you guys loved it! Hope to have more soon!
and wicked erotic reading...a lovely treat. Thanks and take care...hcl
Enjoyed it! Very erotic and arousing....you are very good indeed!