All Comments on 'Master Loses Control Ch. 03'

Sorry but werewolves arent some dam play thing theyre powerful creatures and i understand it wasnt right for him to make her a slave but its not like he made her fuck a girl so for her to fuck him with a dildo is bull shit i hooe when the full moon comes he ges stronger and takes back his pride by showing that botch elf whos the real alpha

To the previous commenter, please take your bleeding heart elsewhere! Also you might want a book on grammar and English to take with you before you pass judgement on such an excellent piece of writing.

Personally, the only negative aspect I could find about this story was its occasional switching in tense. Otherwise it was an enjoyable piece of literature, well done!

Okay. To first person, it's the principle of ownership. And if that actually is the case with any werewolf, I'm a fish. Because I know more about this when it comes to the actual legends and the facts about ANY creature than you. To the second person, don't hate. Now, about the story, fucking great.

Nice continuation of the turn-around story!

Not as well edited as the previous two parts, more spelling/writing errors (your/you're, double "with", is where it should say his).

I love your work on this story wish you would continue it!!