by mdp_2004
Please note that if you want your shitty feedback to sound slightly more intelligent, dynamite is the proper spelling.
I'm really into the sadistic M/m action. Kudos for going really depraved in this installment. I'm looking forward to Kevin's total degradation.
i love this series i want to read more ,such a turn on for me ,i wish i could find a master like that ,it would make me so happy.please write another chapter soon.
Michael is an excellent Master in my mind. Bob is a great sub, and I loved the first five chapters. But not this one. As a Top, Bob is an irrational, erratic, inconsistent asshole--submitting to him would be (for me) a nightmare. Obviously, the story works for other readers, and I'll continue reading your work...but this chapter was a problem for me.