All Comments on 'Master Mike Ch. 06'

by mdp_2004

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Asshole Harry

Please note that if you want your shitty feedback to sound slightly more intelligent, dynamite is the proper spelling.

smoothboismoothboiabout 16 years ago
Please don't wait so long to write part 7

I'm really into the sadistic M/m action. Kudos for going really depraved in this installment. I'm looking forward to Kevin's total degradation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

i love this series i want to read more ,such a turn on for me ,i wish i could find a master like that ,it would make me so happy.please write another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You lost me with this one

Michael is an excellent Master in my mind. Bob is a great sub, and I loved the first five chapters. But not this one. As a Top, Bob is an irrational, erratic, inconsistent asshole--submitting to him would be (for me) a nightmare. Obviously, the story works for other readers, and I'll continue reading your work...but this chapter was a problem for me.

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