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All Comments on 'Master of Elements Ch. 01: Fire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like it, I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like it! Hope you release more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow. A mind control story, four comments so far ... and not one troll whining about how it's rape yet.

clantongangclantongangover 1 year agoAuthor

Yes anon that is nice, although in this case it is not clear whether Chris is any more in control than the girls are regarding what is happening to them - although they all seem pretty happy about it though!

Bark58Bark58over 1 year ago

Really enjoyed this one. Enjoying the mystic element (pun intended) to the story line.

SandtalkerSandtalkerover 1 year ago

Good setup on this. I am glad your protagonist isn’t spending half the time agonizing on the fact he is in control, but instead accepts it and moves on.

I’m also enjoying the mystery of what and why. This looks to be a good premise.

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I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...

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