All Comments on 'Master of Elements Ch. 02: Air'

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clantongangclantongangover 1 year agoAuthor

Each to his own. There will be a lot more of it, so don't bother reading (or scoring) any more parts.

golasgilgolasgilover 1 year ago

Thoroughly enjoying this. Ignore the trolls.

SniperkingSniperkingover 1 year ago

This is moving too fast to be satisfying for me. There is no build-up and too much is skipped.

clantongangclantongangover 1 year agoAuthor

Fair enough - but they are trying to save the world so there is a bit of a rush!

joejacksjoejacksabout 1 year ago

The only complaint I have so far is, how why and where did he get the amulet and set on this path, I am hoping this comes out in the story sometime

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