All Comments on 'Match Point'

Does make the changing rooms a little more fun

Such an erotic story, with touches of realistic detail that bring it alive, not just in the hot sex but the tennis too. Just the thing to read between the French Open and Wimbledon! Read it and be aroused!

Another incredible piece of work. Fay, you are really talented. Keep up the good work beautiful :)

I am not a lesbian but this story was incredible! It was of good length and plenty of detail. Too bad Bruna lost the tennis but I'm sure she will get her win eventually.

You could really connect with the characters here as well and get to feel their emotions when they were pushed over the edge of orgasm.

I really hope Fay writes more stories for everyone to read. If you have not checked out Bruna's gangbang...make sure you do!

Lets make Fay Faymous on Literotica!

Looks like the real Match Point will be the sex, match, game between the new lovers. I hope there's more.

Great story fay I hope to read more of bruna's encounters

A sexy story with a playful attitude throughout. You write well, Fay32.

Lovely writing Fay. I'm looking forward to the next encounter!

Well done, as a writer myself I thought it was well written, loved it still have to get rid of my boner though hahaha!!

Gorgeous. Now, where is my old tennis racquet xxxxx

Love how Bruna's psychology comes across in this. How she thinks she wants to beat Rosie but Rosie's confidence always makes her the one in control

An amazing work, you have great skills Fay

adoringly loving descriptions of both these beautiful women. something about the south american tones of skin that drive me wild!

Great story and wonderful build-up. The images displayed well in the mind and you could feel every emotion.

This was simply awesome to read - and re-read. I hope Fay32 continues sharing her thoughts with us!

All the best,

Charley

We chatted about this so I'll just say that if you want more writing advice I can be contacted via my profile - I check the forum for messages often. I hope you post a new story soon.

Well written and erotic - enjoyed it.

I thought your first short story was well and descriptively written........but this one superceeds it. Well done.