All Comments on 'Matched Pt. 03'

This whole story was spectacular. Even though this was a dark segment, the love between the two characters overshadowed the bad.

It would have been nice to find out what happened to his Dad, and how he got his.

If it helps - he goes to prison! ;) but I wanted the end to focus on Elliot and Damien and not his dad so just left the mums comment about being with someone else and thanking him as a hint! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment xxx

This was a great read. Loved the story and these two characters. I just wish it was longer. More bedroom activities :) That scene with Elliot's wrists tied to the bed frame hanging with this leg rapped about Damien as they made love was one of the hottest scenes that I've read here!

I really enjoyed this love is love

And I know this won’t come out right

But love seens are great you’ve got the male feels right

Keep up the great work

This was such a great story. I enjoyed every word of it. I am really happy that they get their happy ending. Although i hoped for more chapters, because it was so great. 🙂

Hello!! If you enjoy this story please check out the sequel “Striking the match” on my profile! 🥰

Absolutely wonderful.