All Comments on 'Matchmaker 01: January'

This was a fun well written story! Thank you for sharing!

Great plot, well developed characters, romantic settings and happy ever after.

Thank you for making my evening

The only things missing for a true Romance were the proposal and wedding. Very well written!

Clearly the money bothered her and she wanted to be near her family. The sex was great, but that alone isn’t enough of a basis for a LTR. I wish there had been more acknowledgement of feelings of love for a romance story. The story just fell a bit flat at the end. Very well written, however. 4*

Wonderfully written and a great fairy tale told from a slightly different perspective. Loved it.

And a full figured protagonist. I see what you did there.

An amusing premise but actually quite true. People meet, they have some things in common and there is an attraction and before you know it, you don't want to be appart and you enjoy everything about each other. Keep writing!

It seemed so out of her normal behavior. Bought by money and left her Texas home while he made no sacrifices whatsoever.

Loving this 1st chapter. As someone who would trust a human matchmaker over any silly dating app/algo, this rings true.

I cannot relate to these people. Lost me at carrying his own bag was roughing it.

Absolutely a top-notch story. Sure, it's fantasy but the emotions are as real as it gets. And I love happy endings. Can't wait for the next one.

Good story, even if the hard sell scene didn’t quite feel as if it fitted with the rest of the tale, that said I enjoyed it immensely. Many thanks for both writing and posting, cheers, Ppfzz. 5⭐️