All Comments on 'Matchmaker 10: October'

Incredible!

Every month you raise the bar just a bit higher. Great series. November can't arrive soon enough!

Amusing format, and for all of us crusties who have been trained by smart, headstrong women , i thank you.

But formulaic, as you explained earlier as these (each "month") were commissioned stories etc. designed around the same premise by request.

I'd love to read something different from you. Suggestions: friends-to-lovers romance or friends-to-loving-D/s relationship (yes, like BDSM). Those are two of my favorite tropes and you would be great.

SanityCheck always provides me a reason to look forward to a new month. Each story in the Matchmaker series has been good, and this one is top notch too.

Thank you.

I look forward to these every month. But with this one It bothered me that one moment she was pushing him away and suddenly they were in bed. Needed more story telling of the seduction.

That you don't stop after one year. These are too good.

Thank you for the comment.

There are only 12 entries in the series. The problem with writing more is trying to keep the stories fresh. By the time I'd completed October, I was running out of ideas for how to make the characters different and interesting.

I'd rather end it now and leave people wanting more than churning out stories until the readers are wondering why I'm still bothering to writing them.

Dear (author) SanityCheck:

I have appreciated this series -- and I have been intrigued with the character of Brooklyn Lancaster (the "Matchmaker") -- who somehow seems to match other persons and create lasting couples month after month, but not (it seems) have found her own match yet.

I was wondering whether either the December story (or an Epilogue or related story) could be *centered on* Ms. Lancaster finding her own lasting partner (possibly with the help of persons she has matched in previous stories and/or as the unexpected result of a "spark" found with someone who didn't quite "work" as a "companion" for another woman).

Good Luck with the November and December installments, and Thanks for this series.

E. in New York City ("nycreader" at Literotica).

The November and December stories are completed and ready to publish in their respective months.

Over the collection, several readers have asked/hinted that they’d like to see Brooklyn get her own Happy Ever After. I will say nothing about Ms. Lancaster… other than part of the fun of Christmas is the anticipation… yes?

Thanks for your quick and accepting (although noncommittal) reply, SanityCheck.

E./"nycreader".

Another one I loved, especially pairing him up with a dog trainer. Yes, a little formulaic but not necessarily a bad thing. Think I'd be a little upset if November or December don't work out.

5 stars.