All Comments on 'Matt & Lisa at School Ch. 06a'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
too many story lines

trying to tell to much and nothing is coming together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Too Vanilla - Boooring

The reason I look forward to your submissions is your ability to push the boundries, but with this and your previous submission you seem to have mellowed down. This particular submission is question is in fact too bland, too vanilla with no particular distinguishing characteristics.

Where is the anal rimming, the bisexuality, the semi non consensual watersports that were your earlier trademark.

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