All Comments on 'Mattie and the Farm'

Cute little story. thank you.

cheers

SAGE

Hot story, Rad! Very, very nice!

Fantasy. Explicitly graphic. Erotic.

Get story! Does sexy Red have a sexy hairy chest to excite Mattie? He should, as he seems a healthy, well-built man! Hope they stay together!

Hot

I like your writing style and it's easy to read. I liked the story alot and the banter between the characters was funny, sweet and sexy. But, then you dropped into the classic Daddy/Little girl troupe and knocked me right out of the story. There is so much better dialog they could have used.

Good dialogue, interesting characters and erotic. I liked it all.

Gonna need more if this

Please carry on with this story

****Fun read with not the hottest sex but a good teasing type sex. Good read thanks for sharing.

If you decide to continue with this story, I would love to read more. Hopefully you will elect to continue.

I don't often encourage authors to continue a story for several reasons, but in this case I think these two have a LOT more story to share with us. Don't let them down ;)

Thanks for sharing! Easy 5

Rnebular

Unusual, but very good. A sequel would be nice to see just how the twins fit into their plans...

Good but would like to have part 2 as they continue their journey