by smithE101
thanks for the suggestions. I'm currently in the middle of ch8, which is coming along slowly, and will definitely have your advice in mind as i write. The intent is to eventually get these two hitched, which will probably be the final or closing chapters....i'm either going to end it at ch10 or ch15 depending on feedback i get.
I really like your story, the only things I wonder about, Is I thought Matt was going to propose to Kimmy. I also wonder why we don't hear Summer talking more about her sex life with Adam to Kimmy, I am sure they have issues along the way also. I would also think that Kimmy and Summer would be talking more, comparing notes. Does Kimmy and Summer never see each other naked? I mean, I am a little older (33) than them probably, and times have changed a little, but believe me I would notice if my roommate changed her style down there, got a tattoo, or a piercing. I mean for one thing she would tell me and be up or down about it. I also wonder and hope Kimmy tells Matt more about her ex, I think there is more problems there than we know yet.
I think Kimmy also wants to know more about Matt's exes and also flings. Maybe they need a good game of truth or dare. Kimmy has a bit of a wild streak and I am surprised that she hasn't done some more. She did go out without her panties already.