All Comments on 'Mature Affair Ch. 01'

I found the writing to be generally dispassionate and, especially in the erotic(?) scenes, absolutely turgid and rather cliche.

The result was to convey the feeling that the writer has never known truly passionate sex, or what fuels it.

Bummer.

You laid out the ground work very well! The excitement is mounting for the next chapter. More please!

Whatever age you have to make your fun. Good start looking forward to Chapter.02. Thanks for sharing.

I feel as though I might have written the above comment myself.

As I read this, I kept wondering, is this fellow British or Canadian?

Either way, seems to be somewhat constipated.

Women with hairy armpits is DISGUSTING. Didn’t even finish the story after she had hairy armpits.