All Comments on 'Mature Siblings Come Together'

Squel, if not more chapters. Thanks

I read this story years ago when I was in the military. It's funny how some things linger in your mind. I've never forgotten this story and when I read it again this evening it took me back years ago when I read it for the first time!

loved this hot and entertaining story. I hope you write more of it.

We don't get many adult sibling incest/romance stories around here so thanks for doing this. I hope you'll consider continuing this as a series so we have something great to look forward to.

5* with ease and hopes for more!

It's nice to read one where they are a bit older and not the usual just turned 18 or barely 19.

i'm getting bored with the 18 and 19 years old ..

this one is woooooow and beautiful

hope to see more mature adult and older incest stories ..

thanks jeroming.

This story was amazing. So classy. Loved the older couple. Please keep the story

Going. I think it holds so much promise.

Thank you.

just a little long and the build-up dragged at times, but still an exjoyable read

I'm always excited to read a story about adult siblings deciding to have sex. I get so tired of stories about brainless teenagers.

I really liked the story. Wish you had not rushed getting naked. It would have been a little better with some panty play as I am a panty freak.

Circumstances such as divorce, death and finances have caused quite a few mature siblings to live together. Many have made the best of the situation and enjoy each other to the fullest.

Great story. Good built up slightly dragged a bit long. Very few such mature stories. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Good Job.

from the normal fare. Interesting idea having 2 divorced sibling couple like this.

I liked the initial denial then more obvious hints, getting more frequent. While I could say the description of their sexual coupling could have been better (and describing their feelings leading up to it), really nothing was obviously lacking. Good initial overcoming the doubt, acceptance, then moving on to seducing each other. I liked it. :)

One of the best stories I have ever read. I loved it.

Had to wait till the third page till they fucked. But it was good. Long story and seeks attention

Older sibling thing rocks...both old enough to know...well done!

I would like to read more about these two...Five Stars!

This was one of the most difficult stories on Literotica to read. Your phrasing is HORRIBLE!

Your sentence structuring STINKS!!!!!!!!!!

Understand the comment on structure, however it's a bit over the top. I enjoyed the story, and the fact that it prolonged the anticipation. Well done!

Thanks for sharing.

Great believable story. Wonderful pacing. Well written with very few grammatical errors, making it a pleasure to read.

Thanks for a wonderful read.

i like the long tease. could have been better written - dialogue was stiff - but i like the story. probably needs chapter 2 or an epilogue.

Good story. I thought well written.

Eh..it kind of lose it in the middle end