All Comments on 'Mature Woman Conquest: Beth Ch. 02'

hard to get excited when the details are skimpy and the use of the language is almost undecipherable

just love the thought of a strong powerful sexy woman making her boy scream and cry and being unable to stop her

Needs editing, but the idea of a mature woman controling a young man and using him to get her pregnant is very hot.

I take it that the age of consent in your state is 21. Here in the UK, the age of consent is 16. So, I guess that if your story was set in England, the male would have been a boy of 16 and not a young man of 21. If you insist that he is 21, then I can understand him crying: because if I had to wait until I was 21 for a fuck. I would have wept as well.

thats called abuse the guys who have these kind of fantasies have no idea the horror of it. Stop misguiding people

You need someone to edit your work.