All Comments on 'Maude and Me'

This same story is posted twice today under different titles and different author names, why? The blurb says first visit to a bdsm cluc and the story begins by saying she's been going for years. It reads like dry toast. There is little description of physical or emotional responses to what is happening. The only way to know anyone is aroused is you said so as a factual element. We are watching this happen, but in grainy black and white with no sound and from a distance. We want up close high definition and surround sound.

Thanks for making my morning sweetie

Love the story please ignore the negativity and continue writing. The introduction of pee was a stroke of genius as it was so unexpected !!!!! Want to hear more about yours and Ls adventure.