All Comments on 'Max's Small Appliance Repair Ch. 01'

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HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersabout 11 years ago
Nice enough

But badly in need of editing. You tend to mix past and present tenses, among other issues

slimjojoslimjojoabout 11 years ago
very good start!

please continue!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Thumbs up

This has to be the best story I've ever read on this forum and hope there are more to follow.

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