All Comments on 'May Ch. 08'

by Jack1107

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mammoetmammoetover 5 years ago
I like it a lot

i don't know if you have an editor because there are a few mistakes here and there that could be fixed in no time and make the read even more enjoyable.

HotRodLincoln69HotRodLincoln69over 3 years ago
More!!!!!

I think this can go many more chapters.

Such Mags&May and then all four!

Also maybe Mags & Jack get married as way to hid him and his mum?

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