All Comments on 'May Day Eve'

Your story sucks!!!!

i thought it was very sweet...:) lovely.

I can tell that English not your first language so let me say how much I admire your story. I would certainly hesitate to write a story in another language. And despite some misused words, the emotions come through loud and clear. The story is lovely and the boy!sex is hot. That is an incredible accomplishment on your part. I hope you will write more and I look forward to reading them.