All Comments on 'May to December'

Lots of moments that made me smile and all of it makes me long for the next instalment!

Scott's too desperate for this to happen, even if Dawn's half as hot as he wants her to be.

I did my stint chasing broken birds instead of dealing with my own problems in my 20's, so pardon me for reacting badly to what could be the rocky start to a touching romance.

Everyone deserves love but IDK if Scott's offering what Dawn wants at all.

Just 'cause he's horny and turned on by Dawn's stories doesn't mean they're meant to be. He's been so so arrogant and dismissive of her boundaries IMO she needs to file a restraining order on him.

Dawn needs to love herself before inviting anyone else into her life.

Whoever can help her clear out her mental basement with the trust issues, shrink, priest, BFF, barman/barmaid at the local pub, it ain't Scott.

If Scott's a half-decent clinician, he'd know that.

...you will get some answer to your concerns in the ensuing chapters. There are four, and three have already been submitted for publishing.

BTW, Anon raised some valid points.

On to the next chapter!

This story has an excellent plot line with the Older Woman/Younger Man concept. The only problem I had with it was you get lost by being overly descriptive, and you love run-on sentences. Shame on you Teach!