All Comments on 'Maya's Mission Ch. 02'

Your husband is indeed a lucky man...I read it quickly once while stroking and slowly a second time until I couldn't hold back...I just had to cum...your on my favorite author list now.

Who is Maya? You keep calling her Mika in the body of the story.

Please make your chapters a bit longer as they are quite good.

Thanks for the feedback! I truly do appreciate it and read all comments and messages sent my way. In the future you can expect longer chapters. In fact, I'll be submitting chapter 3 of this story in the near future.

Now onto the title faux pas. This seems to be an error during the submission process. The title of this story is and should read 'Mika's Mission'. Why it continues to read incorrectly is a mystery to me. I have requested a correction be made and I'm optimistic that the worker bees of this site will fix it as soon as they are able to.

Again, a big thanks to everyone who has taken time to read and especially to those of you who took the time to comment. You have made this author a happy woman indeed!

xoxoxoxo

Whatever you're sellin', honey, I'm buyin'!

That was so well written, I got immediately lost in the story.

No distractions, no sidelines or diversions. Perfect focus and flow. We get to know each character from their dialogue and the brief but effective descriptive language around them.

You're a master in the making (but I believe you're just new to this community and well established elsewhere).

But, Oh, Man! Are you ever welcome here!

And if he breaks your heart, call me....I'll make it right every day.

Glad you enjoyed it Anonymous! Your feedback is much appreciated. Hope to bring you bigger and better in the future. =o)