All Comments on 'Maybe Later 01: Louann'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 7 years ago
Great story

Can't wait for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I will be dead of old age before he gets her panties off

Are you trying to bore us readers to death or are you actually SCARED to touch her, even in a work of fiction. DAMN, you have strung this story out as thin as a piece of tissue and we are not any closer to any action than we were at the beginning.

I honestly cannot think of a category to put this kind of story into because there is not a tease or Blue Ball category here.

It is very obvious that you have a wife who will not let you even touch her and therein lies your problem. Get rid of her, get a real woman and GET SOME before your balls burst and you bore all of us to death.

A minus 10 score!!!!>7

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