All Comments on 'Maybe Later 02: Linda'

by Pacific462

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 7 years ago
Nice tantalizing story

What will happen next

grayge37grayge37about 7 years ago
IF . . .

you drag this out too much longer, I for one will surely lose interest. You need to generate more interest and excitement into you story to hold the interest of your readers.

Your writing style and story content are good, but for goodness sakes GET ON WITH IT!

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