All Comments on 'Maybe, Maybe Not Ch. 03'

get them to fuck!!!

Your story was mentioned on the New Story Review Thread on Literotica's Bulletin Board in the Author's Hangout Forum. ~ Red

If this is definitely the end, then I'm really disappointed. It's great how you showed the inner conflict of her feelings towards her father but the story needs to continue.

..I just want to mention how much I love that the story ends here.. it's ten times more arousing than if you were to finish it off.

I thought the story was really good. I loved how you didn't jump right into sex as is typically seen with these kind of stories. Also I loved Amy's inner conflict, it makes the story more realistic... however i feel like you disappoint your readers by ending the story the way you did. You definitely should write another chapter about them finally hooking up. I would love to read about her father's reaction to finding out his daughter's been having dirty thoughts about him....

Booo