All Comments on 'Me and Danny Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Reminds me of my relationship with mom. She has allowed many things but never allowed too much. Makes it interesting to wonder what we could've had.

HDblackheartHDblackheartover 3 years ago

Very very well played the narrative is nice and slow its good to have a nice slow build up like this and I'd love to read the sequel when its done as of right now no rating yet I like to rate stories when they are done and this one isn't there yet

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice realistic story

There are many women that have similar experiences. Some try to ignore it thinking it is only a phase. Others confront the lad and put a stop to the peeping and panty stealing. After the initial shock and anger some women like to tease by accidental flashes and leaving pungent panties.

x_pac6969x_pac6969over 3 years ago
Well written Story

This was a great read all the way through.

I do hope that you will continue with this story and what happens next............

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
Very well written

Such a natural increasing buildup

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Excellent build of the characters and the story arc. Yes, we have a pretty good idea of where you're taking us but it's still a fun ride. I'm a little concerned that she's about to start cheating on her husband and that, indeed, she is messing with an emotionally fragile person - all no-no's. I guess that's part of our journey to watch a good family crash and burn in the end. All of this story is believable, so don't stop! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Splendid!

Very well written.

The characters, the inner dialog and the narrative feels real,

So the development of the story is very believable.

The difference from all the plastic, porn stories makes it a treat to read.

Looking forward to the continuation.

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Very good I am setting on the edge of my seat figuratively waiting on the explosion, *5* so far thanks for writing

csltcsltabout 3 years ago
A part of me was curious as to how far he would take it. I was also curious about how far I would let him take it.

Love reading her thoughts!

KallMeTTKallMeTTabout 3 years ago

Good job! Well written and edited. Wish my stories were as polished. Looking forward to the next chapter.

booty77loverbooty77loverabout 3 years ago

i for one hope it don't stop 100% HOT thanks i can't wate to read the nexed one

zeuspmzeuspmalmost 3 years ago

one of the best aunt nephew stuff I've read. all plotpoints were believable & nowhere did it feel unrealistic..

x_pac6969x_pac6969almost 3 years ago

Wow what a great story i hope to read more of this hot story 01/08/21

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