All Comments on 'Me and Danny Ch. 04'

Love how you are mentoring your nephew...some lucky gal will be the beneficiary of your teaching abilities. But at the same time giving tips to the reader...like how to deep-throat a long cock. Too bad you didn't give us the recipe for your chicken noodle soup. Looking forward to future chapters!!

Your writing feels so real, and you convey the emotions involved in a splendid way.

The steam from their bodies wets our own skin.

Continue please!

OK - I'm caught up now... My comment from last chapter (read it just before this) stands,

I am on edge at the train wreck you're driving us to. Whatever you do, when Martin finds out (and he will if you keep this "real") shit will hit the fan. Do NOT throw a plot twist that he's "into" Danny and his wife having sex together. That version of Martin is NOT what you've shown us to this point. (You did mention he likes to show off his wife but I don't know too many loving, ex-Marine husbands that like to share with another man.) It's clear Ronnie needs counseling related to "empty nest" syndrome but what fun would this story be if she did the right thing before she fucks her nephew... 5*

I like the slow burn of the activity, love that it’s ramping up slowly but surely. Also, saw another comment talking about when the husband finds out and stuff...but who cares about real, I’m here and I read here to get away from reality obviously. I’d rather just enjoy a story about two people pushing past their boundaries together. Keep up the good work.

Loving your writing. Good build up and story development. I hope you keep it up.

I love your story and your style is superb! My only criticism, and I doubt anyone else will care, is your use of the word "vulva". It's from the Latin root of "vulgar". I, a 100% heterosexual man, don't find anything vulgar about them. In fact I think they're beautiful. Just say pussy.

And these two have GOT to fuck. If Martin ever finds out about all this, she'll been deep shit, and saying "OK, so I French kissed him, sucked his dick, he ate my pussy and played with my asshole, but we didn't fuck, I didn't commit adultery" won't mean Jack shit to him. He'll probably say something like "go ahead and fuck him, I'm out of here."

This is one of the best stories on here period. Please continue, the climax will be fantastic!

Everyone drink a shot when you see the words secret language in this story.

What great reading this is.

I do hope there will be another chapter . 03/08/21

Drawn out stories cause me to loose interest....I will never find out how this one ended......