All Comments on 'Me and My Cousin Ch. 01'

by Bateyboy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
hot

this story is so damn hot can't wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
One Hot Story

Loved it and can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I quit reading at her comment. "I've never seen...

..a cock as big as yours."

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
blah...

this was ok...but not the best...next time have someone proof read your story for typos...i think that's the worst thing...reading a story and getting into it, then BOOM...there's a word that doesn't belong or is spelled incorrectly...good job for the most part though.

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 17 years ago
Excellent Start!

Yep, it needs a little proof reading but the story line is quite good. Leave a line to show breaks in the time line. That would help smooth the flow. Last thing you need is to listen to that "Anonymous" person(s). HA! Please continue this soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
TeRRiFiC....!

This was just ToO cOOL...!!! LoVed yR sToRy.....pLeasE dO wRiTe mORe....

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