All Comments on 'Me and the Neighbor's Kid'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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Crotch

Not crouch please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
"...rock hard membrane"?

What's a "rock hard membrane"?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Misspellings detract from arousal

Very simple wrong words and misspellings broke the flow of excitement for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Editor!

This is not only incoherent but the spelling and grammar are atrocious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

WTF??? WAY TOO COMPLICATED. NOT sexy. And a lot of it didn't make sense. MAJOR erection killer.

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