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MaonaighMaonaighabout 4 years ago
I told you so...

I told you you can write and Me Too just confirms that. This is a well-drawn picture of a grim and dangerous world and those who are forced to inhabit it. The story did finish a bit abruptly so I'm hoping that there will be a follow-on. There are several typos and grammatical and spelling errors but nothing too terrible---it's just that mistakes stand out more when an author shows talent as you do. That said, I'm certainly looking forward to seeing more of your work. Five stars.

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Been a member before and I just kinda miss the place. Won’t be on the forums much this time though as it gets a wee bit headachy there for me. Gonna post up a couple of my old stories and try and write some new stuff. If you think you remember me, say hello 😘