All Comments on 'Mean Girls of Maplewood Ch. 10'

Then again, glad to see someone punish "Pastor" Robert. However, it is disturbing that Red so totally controls April now. I suppose that's part of her spell, but I hope to see that hold broken. Still, it's your story. I'll keep reading for sure. You got me hooked on it.

Great chapter, I am excited for the next one.

I really hope to see more of Leslie and Humbert in the next chapter, I loved their story together.... and really hoped to see them get into a more consented relationship... I never got into any story on here like i did with this one..... loved every chapter... especially the first shower scene when Leslie put her leg over the one girls shoulder and had reds BF fuck her mouth as a simulated pussy... such a hot scene :) great work... love it....

Definitely more of them. Despite their fucked up history, I can't help but think that they are meant for each other. Can't wait for Robert to get what's coming to him.

You're writing is simply perfection, and i cant wait for the next chapter

This has been one of my favorites in Literotica! :)

Quick question though: Melissa is still alive right? I was kinda confused cause they did dump her body into a river? Or was it someone else?

We've been waiting for so long and id truly hate to see such a marvelous writer fade to memory

I can't wait to see what happens next.

I wonder what's happened to Leslie and Humbert, hope they are still in the story.

really cant wait for the next chapter, the suspense is killing me.

I don't mind the idea of Humbert and Leslie getting together at the end. However, honestly, after what Humbert has been through, I wouldn't be surprised if he rejects her again. I believe they should just forgive each other and go their separate ways, putting this ugly history behind them. Both of them need psychological and emotional help. After they do, who knows. Maybe Humbert goes to that comic book convention on the west coast, meets a cute cosplayer, falls in love, and has the perfect, healthy relationship he deserves. And maybe Leslie becomes successful in school and becomes famous and successful lawyer, specializing in cases of rape. I don't know. This is just what I think should happen.

Honestly, it's been like 7 months. I'm considering writing the next chapter myself, with no happy endings of course

I have to say it u probably tired of the story and we would be lucky to have a next chapter. I understand it suck but I get it. time to move on or bad case of writer block. still it would be nice to get a story about Leslie and humbert. like u did with brad and the two cheerleaders in the cabin. I would love to see their thoughts after that night in the wood and Leslie gangbang. The story can be stand alone event can take place months later give both to breathe and grow. Did she go back to Melissa why or did she break away. Humbert secret out now what? did he tell the whole story. either way it up to you. if you're stuck just ask us or if life getting in the way handle it and get on back here where you belong! peace

Working on the next chapter as we speak; I realize some people want these out as soon as possible but I do have other responsibilities that take precedence over these stories. Sorry about the wait but I wont put out a half-assed installment. Thank you for reading the story so far...