All Comments on 'Mechanics of the Heart Ch. 01'

Love how the new story line is starting out; looking forward to the next chapter. I am glad Danny and his mechanic are doing great and reaching out to the parents.

Loved this chapter, great start!!!

I was reading and then all of a sudden it seems another story was on the screen with totally new characters.

In response to the commenter who got confused when the story switched from Danny/Roberto to Simon, yes, that was intentional. The connection between the two sets of characters will become more clear in the upcoming chapter.

Good to see that Danny & his mom have a truce regarding "the boyfriend". The new possible couple has piqued my interest and I await you next chapter.

If the mother is Asian and the father French, why is the mother's surname Asian? She would have taken the French father's surname, surely?

To the commenter above, Danny's mother chose to keep her maiden name. My mother did the same :)

I hope many other readers have discovered this story and read this far.

Started this chapter then the switch! Wha? Reading on...