All Comments on 'Mechanics of the Heart Ch. 02'

Hope things go well for Simon and Luke.

I really enjoy your stories and I'll definitely be reading all of this once it's posted. just one small niggle - your use of "the singer" "the bear" "the 31 year old" etc (when "he" would normally be sufficient) is quite jarring at times. I'm like - who are all these people and when's the gang bang? :)

I love the story but can't help but laugh at how he needs his parents permission to stay at Roberto's house. He's a grown man above legal drinking age I believe & he has a good job, an adult a responsible one at that. He's not a 12 yr old going to a slumber party he doesn't need permission or their approval on his friend or boyfriends. He has to love his mate not his parents so their opinions aren't valid. Not saying he should disrespect them but the most they need to know is what he does under their roof & when he's coming & going. Its none of their business where he spends his time. I feel like his mother wouldn't be treating him like this if he were dating a girl. She treats him like he's a little girl that needs protecting from the world instead of a grown man.