All Comments on 'Mechanics of the Heart Ch. 05'

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geemeedeegeemeedeeover 10 years ago

There's a fine line between freaky and rapey. I don't think Jae knew where it was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Poor Simon

Hoping things change for Simon, its time for someone to cherish him. Waiting.... Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Drop zone? Centrifuge? Great America, right?

I feel as if Roberto and Danny are outshining Simion's part of the story by a lot.

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 10 years ago
Nope, too rapey

I didn't like Simon's story at all; the WTH moment with Luke and the WTF moment with Jae. I was pissed at Jae, is he inexperienced or just an over all douche? This was a turn off for me.

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