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To my surprise she was much tighter than I had anticipated and had to wait and go slowly until our combined body fluids would allow me to try and rock her world like she had done mine. When we both reached the plateau simultaneously it was incredible. She pulled my head down and locked me into a kiss I had never felt before. It was incredible. It was also the stimulation we were going to receive from each other only once and never again.

"Colleen, when you leave here today, I want you to understand that if I ever find out you have cheated again I will make sure you end up on the street."

"I promise, I won't do it again." She tried to say.

"I am not finished. You are also going to become a different person after today. I better not see Bitchy Colleen ever again. You better be nice to everyone in my family and especially your husband."

"I love Dennis, I really do."

"And you will start living within the financial means that my family has established. If you can't do that you need to move on now. Your lavish lifestyle is going to stop. You didn't earn it and I am going to make sure you definitely don't spend it."

I allowed her to let that sink in before I continued.

"And in good faith so I know you are serious, you are going to go trade in your gas guzzler for a more realistic form of transportation. One that can carry a family someday."

She just looked at me and smiled when I said family.

"And if I hear you have done anything opposite of what I just said, videos go out and I will take you in the ass again without lube. Understand?"

It was amusing watching Colleen for the next couple of years. No one trusted the fact that she was now being nice to everyone. There had to be a motive. There actually was, but I promised I would hold what I know in secret unless she ever screwed up again. Minus a couple of pairs of real nice jeans she stopped wearing designer clothing and started to look like the young twenty something that she was. She had quit her job and found a new job as a nurse in a local pediatricians office and was now asking Dennis to start a family so she had something to carry around in her minivan.

She also asked that they sell their huge house and buy a smaller one in a neighborhood that was younger with children. She wanted her children to have someone to play with as they grew up. We would occasionally catch each other's eyes and smile but I made it a point to never be alone with her again. All I knew is that she was becoming the kind of girl a family would welcome.

I kept the second phone in the drawer for almost two years. When Colleen delivered her first baby girl I took the phone over to her house one day when she was home alone and handed it to her. It took her a moment to figure out what it was. Even though I had the files on the laptop, the phone was a gesture that I told her I had approved of her changes. She hugged me, started crying and said thank you through her tears. I looked at her daughter in the day bed before she broke away from the hug and I said to her.

"This child is more important than money. It is with this gift that you will learn you have everything."

The End.

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26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

A little different, but still a good story.

dark2donut2dark2donut2almost 3 years ago

This is kind of stupid. The guy gets sexual favors from woman he is blackmailing and the author keeps on moralizing? Did not occur to the author that she can break that any time? How would he explain that to "Dennis"? "I was disciplining her sexually"?

The plot has an idea but it went quickly down the drain. I notice that in other story from this author as well, in his "Physical Therapy" story he gest great plot going only to stumble in the end going for miscommunication melodrama.

I am really sorry to see good plot going to waste when the author loses energy toward the end and does simplistic resolutions. "The bitch changes into a princess" thanks to sex discipline training? Yeah, right.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
That was good

He taught her a lesson that made her a better wife and person. Cheating has consequences, even if they aren't terminal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Of course

Lordslummydooggy never met a rape he didn't like.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 6 years ago
One and done ? Breaking the girl ( err a cheating shrew actually). How can the Two Main Characters be content to clamber down from an towering aerie of carnal propitiation ?

" I am a man

Cut from the know

Rarely do friends

Come and then go"

She was a girl

Soft but estranged

We were the two

Our lives rearranged".

Strong overall intro that developed the characters well. I was sooo ready for strsying wife to be humbled. Maybe the narrator could have established just how bonded he was with nephew to explain the extreme measures of retribution and Colleen's involuntary attitude adjustment.

"Feeling so good that day

A feeling of love that day

Twisting and turning

Your feelings are burning

You're breaking the girl

Think you're so clever

But now you must sever

You're breaking the girl."

Once the characters were well established thanks to writer's skill . It was clear these both these two had ample motivation and capability for " grudge fuck of a lifetime " . Excellent job detailing heated action . This is a fantasy site - not story subject to intullectual rigor . Clearly uncle had conflict of interest in his dual roles as judge and lascivious jailer - a hall of fame writer like FinishtheDammStory or Scouries would have done some swift bunco double talking jive to obscure contradiction. Oh well.

Bottom Line : So logic was a little slipshod. Excellent character development and heated taboo coupling. That's why I hope to see on Literotica. This wasn't hall of fame or even favorite - worthy . But still this tale hooked me and held my interest till " twilight of love had arrived ".

Full marks * * * * *

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