All Comments on 'Medieval Incest Stories 01'

So true to the era. It's a shame incest is now so frowned upon.

Really good can’t wait for the next chapter

Only thing. You can't move a bishop first without moving out a pawn. So either the game was already started to allow the bishop's move or it should have been a white pawn for brother.

if edited, making it easier to read. "sense" for 'since'

"His cock was at a half mash" or half mast?

How long before polygamy and incest are legalized, using the same arguments members of the LGBTQ community used to get the Supreme Court to legalize Gay and Lesbian marriages? Eventually they'll have to decide, but the Supreme Court shifted the country to a slippery slope with that case, the Court will have to decide if they arguments about incest and polygamy are justifiable or just an attempt to discriminate like the laws regarding same-sex marriages were. The Supreme Court started the United States down a slippery slope, to adult polygamy or polyamory, to adult aged incest, but they'll have to stand their ground at some point, whether now or in 150 years, regarding some relationship types, certain relationships should be illegal, including those that are justifiably criminal like people under age and people trying to marry things that aren't functional humans.

The premise and storyline are fine. It's the execution and presentation that are lacking.

A story made up of a string of single-sentence paragraphs is difficult to read. Study the writing of others -- not necessarily Literotica authors, but popular published works -- to see how sentences and paragrapghs should be structured and how dialogue and narrative should flow.

Give royal brother Prince Henry some sexy chest hair for his magnificent body! He seems a ver sexy young man!

This is the worst story I have read in months. A series of statements, misspellings, mistakes, grammatical errors. Good grief, it sucks.

Get a proof reader or don't post.

Fantastic story maybe it can continue on as brother and sister don't make her pregnant this time but keep on trying and make her pregnant and with the father approval she will become pregnant and have many children