by NovusAnimus
There were a few rough moments with grammar, wording and spelling in this story. Are you rushing to story to put it out on schedule? You probably shouldn't do that, and make sure each chapter is as good and as sharp as you'd like it to be.
I was moving across the country at the time. Keeping with the release schedule is important, but I am definitely going to strive to spend more time editing and smoothing out issues. Chapter 10 is already on my Patreon, but I'll be keeping an extra eye out for issues while I write chapter 11 and onward, thank you.
Yeah I also noticed quite a few mistakes and I personally don't mind a slight delay in upload time once you keep us informed maybe with a bio update or something if it means a cleaner end product. People mostly hate being left in the dark about whether a story is continuing or not more so than whether it comes out exactly on time