All Comments on 'Medusa Pt. 04'

Not much interest in this story so I thought I'd have some fun with it for those who liked my "Blind Girl in the Rain/Snow" series which made it more enjoyable to write. Sad it didn't really work as I thought it contained some of my best writing. Don't think romance or love stories really go with adult xxx story sites so I've joined wattapad and will post these types of stories there from now on - including updated versions of Blind Girl series and Dreamers..

The story was GREAT... the ending not so much. Too much was put in the epilogue and not part of extending the story. The blind girl story is a good example, it carried through to the end. This one seemed to 'finish' about three quarters of the way through the story should have been, then chopped off and became the epilogue.

Only other thing I could see is to take the epilogue and make it a second chapter. That could actually be a nice finish to it.

I think love stories and romances can do very well on this site. In this story in particular the main character came across as very unlikable to me in the first chapters. That is probably the reason this story didn't do as well your other stories. Please don't let that get you discouraged. Thanks.

There are those of us who truly enjoy a good romance tale. Please keep posting you are an excellent writer. The Blind Girl series was one of the best I have read here!