by smotp
There are are some hot things about this (particularly the idea that she's cumming from sucking you), but those are more than outweighed by how formal and clinical her delivery is. I never get the impression that she's aroused by the thought of sucking me -- only that she's pretending to be. SMOTP's "DEV For Men: An Orgasm Experience" is so much better.
I felt like she was reading the script, and her excitement was not convincing, the script had parts that were erotic, but overall, not one of your best.
The first thing that struck me was how tinny the recording sounded. There was a lot of sharpness to Jezebel's voice that wasn't conducive to relaxation and initially getting into the proper mood for the audio. You've had other lady contributors with much smoother voices in the past.
I also agree with the other earlier commentators that you could tell Jezebel was reading from a script. Several times I noticed her make a slight pause before the last words in a sentence, which broke the flow of the monologue.
However, I must say that it did draw me in, once I got used to her voice. Enough so, that I'll want to listen to it again.
I'm giving it four stars. It was good, but not great. There was room for improvement.
I hope your not a licensed hypno-therapist, because if I was your client I would be demanding my money back.