All Comments on 'Meeting Hannah Ch. 01'

great story, shame about the second coming... 75 for the story, 25 off for not checking the posting.

Hi,

Great story, we read it in bed together, we both came as hard as you did in your story. The repeat bit (always check your editing) was no prob for us, just got us more randy thats all.

Look forward to Part 2

Tom & Sue xx

PS Hope you read our story too..24 Hours.

The repetition took a great deal away from the total impact of the story.

However, I did enjoy the game playing. Well done in that respect.

Although I didn't like the some of the repetitions in the beginning, I enjoyed your story very much. *smiles*

The monogamous relationship. If you agree to it, play by the rules. If not don't. It's that simple. Weak people are controlled by their genitals.