by RavenBleu
A story told by a woman.
In my experience, limited as it is, they are really not linear thinkers.
As alluded to in the book about Mars and Venus.
But we do love them so very much.
I’ve been reading Literotica since I was a teen and have never commented before but wow, this was so delightfully serendipitous to encounter — a lot of little things really resonated and made this feel so tangible to me. Wow! I wish it were longer!? The end snuck up on me I felt (but also I usually ADD brain out a bit before the end). I hope you interest in sharing more writings! <3
Thank you for the feedback! I write my experiences and yes, there will be more!
Does his chest have sexy hair that can be pressed against her breasts? That could be a real turn on -- and very sensitive to have her breasts rub against his hairy pecs!
Very well written story, you captured her state of mind perfectly. Her low self esteem, lack of confidence from a bad break up then pushing herself to take a leap of faith and chance an encounter with the *stranger* she’s talked to online.
Re Comment from : ealexer
I’m not sure I understand why you’re confused? Everything in the story was crystal clear (see my comment above) the fact that she lingered over a painful memory whilst taking this leap of faith on a new relationship only serves to add depth to the character, giving it realism. Making a broad sweeping statement women being as incapable of linear thought is just wow, so far beyond patronising that it’s ridiculous.
Ravenbleu, I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing, thanks for sharing.
Tess (UK)