All Comments on 'Meeting Karen'

.... so therefore there is no possibility of your story being believable!!

Therefore reading it would be a waste of my time!

It's very off-putting being written in the 2nd person. Probably why most writing is in the 1st or 3rd person. It just feels natural - unlike this.

Had trouble getting into the story.

I was just lost I had no interest in this story I just can't even read it , it was just so off putting

I wasn't thrilled with the second person storytelling, either, but for a quick 'Wham, bam! Thank you, ma'am." I ejoyed it. A fun read.