All Comments on 'Meeting Marie Ch. 03'

You continue to amaze and delight with your incredible erotic depth and easy storytelling abilities. The feeling is right and the situations so very relatable. Everything you write is filled with a joy and happiness that fills your readers (at least this one) with the same feelings. The joy of being delightfully and shamelessly naked is presented in such a beautiful way that I smiled as I thought about it. A wonderful, brief series! Forget about the silly win related errors, the story is the interplay between the two women which was addressed flawlessly.

I always look forward to your writing and will always be a dedicated fan.

please do not make this the lasy chapter. the story and the images it creates are so good. we need to know what toys made anna nervous of showing.

Please some more of this story

This may be the final chapter but the way it ended makes me feel there is unfinished business here and you've left the way open to return to this couple sometime in the future. You have certainly shown yourself to be a worthy contributor to this site, Anna, and I hope we can look forward to much more from you. (All that said, can we please get on a rocket ship and set course for Saturn?)

Hello again lovely readers!

I thank you all for your wonderful comments. The ones from Mistress Christine, Ells, Sheila and Maonaigh in particular, but also all of the Anonymous posters. Whoever you are.

There will be more Marie stories, as well as Brittany, but now I am going back to Saturn for the weekend.

Yes, Maonaigh, you read that right.

Love, hugs and light to you all!

Anna

xxxx

Surely you cannot do this to us! Not without revealing the mysterious contents of the toy boxes. I feel I speak for all your readers ... we need to know. Joking aside, sleep was a lovely way to end especially after all the excitement of the day. Maybe you should leave them to rest in peace... but I hope not.

I thought this was a good short series, I do hope you get back to this soon as this was a little short and 2 weeks is not a long time wonder if she will stay longer than that in the next chapter we will see

Loving and sexy...

xx

This has been a great short series. I loved the slow build-up and the subtle transitions of both cararcters. Yet more star quality writing, love it!

... and this just one more time when writing "Meeting Marie". I hope we shall see more of the kind. Stories like this make reading Literotica an outstanding source of joy (although, I have to admit sadly, a lot of rubbish gets published there, as well).

Unlike in "Saturn Rising", the development of this relationship (the strong love between Anna and Marie) is plausible and much more believable. Being a notorious pessimist, I wonder, however, how it ends and why. Will you ever tell us?

But, good stuff, Anna! And congratulations.

Clearly a great peak of the story. Loved reading every word. Would love to read more from Anna and Marie and about how their relationship evolves. Many thanks to anna for the beautiful story. hugs

This beautifully written chapter made me purr like a kitten with delight! I hope there will be more!

Marixxxxx

There were delicious undertones of d/s here, and Marie is a delightful playful kitten.

Loved the whole Marie series. I really like the gentle D/s stories and this is one of the best ones. I've not spied anyone making a comment about your dialog but I was fascinated by how well it has been written. The whole "little one" and "kitten" names as well as Marie's playfulness just was really well done. I'd like to see more stories like this in the future.

J

A lovely series, to bad that, same as "5 years", it's unfinished.

A delightful and very erotic story! A bit different to your usual style but as with all your stories has a lovely feel and so well written!

Thank you again