All Comments on 'Meeting Ms. Write'

Probably ought to go back over the text before you post it though

Needs editing, using there for their, couldn't picture it when he pinched her clit and put a thumb in her rectum. How was he supporting his upper body with both hands engaged below. Logistically unlikely.

but this story is what i imagined one to be.

many writings have a foreword...but forward??

english mostly ok. sappy writing, though. not being negative. applaud you for the effort, but i did skip to the end.

don´t give up. however, you need an editor, since going back to school is probably out of the question.

still, i thank you for your effort.