All Comments on 'Meeting Neighbors'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
utterly ...

... boring

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Wow that was kinda harsh. It's a pretty god story for what it's worth.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Could have been good

Your story could have been good- the numerous spelling and grammar errors made it difficult to read- get an editor for help

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
it is okay

A quick edit would improve it but it is very predictable and does not really have any depth or a plot.

It is definatly not great but it is not bad either.

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