by GemmaGemmaGemma
Brilliant first part, do hope you continue with more episodes, did like Becca's last words. Naturally 5 stars.
Great story. nice build up and a nice little twist that was half expected at the end.
Hope there is at least a part two.
The story was well setup when it came to the parent's anxiety and excitement, but I was hoping for more description of the 3 characters. Also their sexual escapades could have used a bit more detail. I enjoyed the twist at the end. Perhaps you will do another visit in which Rebecca joins in.
A beautiful story, short and sweet, and in some aspects surprisingly real. A good orgiastic sex party is a wonderful thing. I've only been to one and thoroughly enjoyed myself, although I was a bit too shy. Thank you, and keep writing.
Nice flow. A bit of conflict... there are possibilities here. Possibly even the family hosting their own party.
Somehow didn't see it coming, had a good laugh. Very hot, I'd love to read a second part!
Great story; but, Tom should have grabbed his daughter and plunged his dick deep into her throat. The three of them should then strip and have an all inclusive threesome.
Love this story! It is hard to believe that Becky did. not recognize her parents - but perhaps she did - how fun!
Fabulous take on father/daughter incest story. I love the fact that Rebecca had been in the sex club giving blowjobs for two years before the sexy parents joined!